Wednesday, February 11, 2015

2/10/15

He wants to wander the earth and tell his story to who he meets and show them to respect gods creation. It shows the reader to follow his lessons and the larger lesson is that u can redeem yourself from your mistakes

8 comments:

  1. Good job, I agree that it shows the listeners to respect God's creation.

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  2. not your best work could do more my son. next time

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  3. Well written, check your punctuation there is a missing period in there.

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  4. Expand on this, you seem like you have very good points on the story.

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  5. elaborate a little more, your response got right to the point although its a bit short.

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